Sunday, October 31, 2010

Billy Was Tricked

There was this girl Billy fancied
In taking her out he did succeed;
     A long walk after dinner,
     Finally home and bummer!
She was a dude, he'd been tricked.


This is my first try at a Limerick.

For One Single Impression.
Prompt 140: Fancy.

20 comments:

Harshad mehta said...

Oh, no. how I wish she was smart and interesting!

Ramesh Sood said...

Ha, Ha, I join Harshadji in expressing disappointment.. well Sumit good first try ..

Sumit Sarkar said...

:D
Thank you for stopping by Harshadji and Ramesh Sir...

If I had portrayed her smart and interesting...then there would be no humor and fun in this...I thought...
and I have read that limericks are witty and humorous in nature...

JP/deb said...

fun & clever limerick!!

Jeeves said...

:DDD...Nice one

Sweetest in the Gale said...

lol...this one made me smile. You succeeded in your first limerick attempt!

Sumit Sarkar said...

Thank you Deborah, Jeeves and Sweetest in the Gale... :)

Teresa said...

So very funny. Nice poem.

Reflections said...

Clever piece, nicely done.

Sumit Sarkar said...

Thank you Teresa and Reflections... :)

Kumiko Mae said...

this is sooo fun to read! congratulations! job well done :)

Sumit Sarkar said...

Thank you Kumiko... :)

Tammie Lee said...

fun and scary and i know people who have experienced this!

Sumit Sarkar said...

Thanks Tammie... :)

Patti said...

hehehehe...nice one! And you did great for the Limerick!

Sumit Sarkar said...

Thanks Patti... :)

Amity said...

Ha ha ha...he was tricked!

So clever a limerick this is Sumit! :-)

Sumit Sarkar said...

:D
Thank you Amity...

mohit said...

hahaha...great poem...

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