Thursday, October 14, 2010

A Blemished Soul


His life, a blemish
Prays, wishes for redemption -
Alas! second chance?


For Haiku Heights.
Prompt #12 - Blemish.

9 comments:

umapoems said...

Simple and powerful Haiku!

Rumya said...

A straight forward Haiku. Very nice.
Is that your sketch Sumit?? It's very good. :)

Sumit Sarkar said...

Thank you Umapoems and Rumya...
yes Rumya, I did sketch the picture...thank you... :)

WINDOWLAD said...

...awesome haiku... a complete package of a good haiku... cheers!!!:D

TC.

>Kelvin

Eye-shuh said...

Lovely haiku.
Great post, a beautiful expression.
<3

Sumit Sarkar said...

@Windowlad
Thank you brother... :)

Thank you Eye-shuh.. :)

Olivia said...

- granted -
Very well written- such a strong story/message conveyed with only a few word.. very well done..

Olivia said...

Hello Sumit, how are you?
you are invited to join our poetry community, a place for poets to share and encourage.
Please check us out at:
Jingle Poetry : http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/
Our Monday Poetry Potluck is open from Sunday 8pm to Wednesday, 8am.
Write a poem fitting our week 7 theme (love and romance), post it, and link in to our potluck post as soon as we are open, that's how you get the best possible feedback.
We value your contribution and cherish your poetry talent.
Let me know if you have further questions..Hope to see you then.
xoxox

Sumit Sarkar said...

Thank you Olivia for liking it... :)
I am fine and I would love to join your poetry community...
Thank you for inviting me...

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