Sunday, October 10, 2010

Thirsty Wanderer


Arid, scorching heat
Sweaty lonely man wanders
Mirage, hope, water


For One Single Impression.
Prompt 137: Lonely.

11 comments:

Amity said...

I could feel the pain, the thirst and the heat...wandering on desert alone, wishing for water to quench his thirst!

Systematic Weasel said...

I'm thirsty just by reading this, LOL! Good response to the prompt! =)

-Weasel

Sweetest in the Gale said...

Wonderful take on the prompt - the photo adds impact to your words!

Sumit Sarkar said...

Thanks Amity, Weasel and Sweetest in the Gale for your wonderful words... :)

Bing (PinkLady) said...

it's amazing how these short verses were able to clearly convey helplessness and desperation. i can almost feel his thirst. you did a great job!

gautami tripathy said...

Short and succinct!

dad, farther and farther away

Ramesh Sood said...

How I wished I could reach there with water.. thanks for a wonderful write..

Sumit Sarkar said...

Thank you Bing for your kind words...
Thank you Gautami and Ramesh for such generosity...

WINDOWLAD said...

...adorable... very simple yet very captivating... you summarized all the emotion of one who have been in a dessert for long...^^ great job!!!:)

TC.

.Kelvin

Reflections said...

Wonderful blend of picture and words...

The loneliness of the desert can be stifling....

Sumit Sarkar said...

@Windowlad
thanks brother... :)

@Reflections
Thank you..loneliness of a desert is really stifling... :)

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