I enjoyed the mood created by this haiku. However I did find one word disconcerting. Opens, singular. I just felt it should have been 'Open', plural. Other than that, which as I say was a bit disconcerting for me, I really enjoyed it. Enjoy your really dark pic too. Think you captured the mystic theme well...
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Beautiful, moody, dramatic sky! A wonderful complement to your lovely haiku of shadowy Nature!
beautiful.
Happy Weekend.
wonderful prompt!
i like this.. storms at an eye opening! very mystical for sure..! :)
Thank you Greyscale, Jingle, Priyanka and Leo... :)
Beautiful picture and an awesome haiku to go with it.
Thanks Teresa... :)
Beautiful haiku.The eyes opening and lighting the earth...mystic
Both lovely and dark Ku. Awesome work.
Melanie
Thanks Uma and Cassiopeia.. :)
I loved it..
--Someone Is Special--
I enjoyed the mood created by this haiku. However I did find one word disconcerting. Opens, singular. I just felt it should have been 'Open', plural. Other than that, which as I say was a bit disconcerting for me, I really enjoyed it. Enjoy your really dark pic too. Think you captured the mystic theme well...
Thanks SIS...
Thank you Catherine for liking it...and thank you a lot for pointing out the mistake... :)
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