Tuesday, November 23, 2010

In Love With You - Perfect Poet Award Acceptance Post

I was, and am, and always will be
In love with you, my dearest
For when you are close or near me
You enliven me, I say in earnest

I am glad, you gave me your heart
When there were many to die for you
Just like the moon holds onto earth
And all the stars, lost in the blue

With you, your love and blessings
I can swim through the highest tide
You have always taken care of my feelings
And are a lovely romantic life-guide

I can never imagine a life without you
You are a flame within me, my inner-light
If bereft of you, to life, I will bid adieu
As it will be as dark as a new-moon night


For Thursday Poets Rally Week 33.


Thank you Jingle for the award. I nominate Colors of Mind.

26 comments:

Jingle said...

you make me smile,
wow,
so beautiful acceptance post...

awesome nomination....

Jingle said...

please submit this to potluck if you wish...
Happy Monday.
Thanks for the comments in my place.

David Waters said...

a lovely delightful poem, and congrats on the award;)

cheers

Sameen said...

Hey, that's so sweet :)

G.K. Asante said...

Lovely piece.

JamieDedes said...

A very sweet love poem and a well-deserved honor. Congratulations on both, Sumit.

Amity said...

Sumit is so in love...Love is in the air here... :-)

Loved the lines: 'If bereft of you, to life, I will bid adieu
As it will be as dark as a new-moon night'!

Thanks for this love-filled poem Sumit!

TALON said...

Awww! What a gorgeous love poem! This was beautiful. (and how I feel about my hubby)

Congrats on the award - so well deserved!

deadpoet88 said...

Lovely poem, very good tribute to someone you love! Your words are so sincere. :)

Bing (PinkLady) said...

what a beautiful, romantic post! congrats on your well-deserved award.

Teresa said...

Such a wonderful love poem! Congrats on the award.

gospelwriter said...

a perfect love poem from a "perfect poet" - congratulations

short poems said...

Beautiful love poems, pleasant reading :)
Cong on the award!

Sh@s said...

Beautiful lines.
Congrats! for the award.

Arts web show said...

This is a beautiful poem.
Great jiob with this

Lu Ann said...

You truly deserved to win... it is very nice! It melted my heart to read these lines of you. Thanks for sharing. :)

Tom Baker said...

Sumit, I came here from Olivia's blog. I am a first time visitor with a favor to ask. I feature poems on my site once a month and I would like to showcase In Love With You. The segment is called Poetic License. November’s posted on the 16th if you would like to visit and see for yourself.

If you allow me, your poem will get full credit to you and a link back to this site. I would like to use this poem for February. It is the only month with a theme and romantic, love and sexy poems will be featured. In addition, every quarter I will post the previous four months worth of poems in one large post. You can email me or I will visit back here to see your reply to get the answer. Thanks again and whatever your decision, this is a great poem.

Tom

viddhi said...

a very subtle love poem.
amazingly beautiful.....

and congrats for the award ! :)

Sumit Sarkar said...

@everyone...
Thank you everyone so much for liking this...
I am sorry I am not able to read all your works frequently...
I am a bit busy...Thank you for bearing with me... :)

@amity
:D...

@Tom
I would love to showcase my poem on your site...
Thank you for stopping by... :)

Deepika Vasudeva said...

wow!... this one truly deserves the award!

Sumit Sarkar said...

Thanks Deepika... :)

Fyodor Lewis said...

"stars lost in blue"
"as dark as new-moon night"

You have some beautiful imagery.
Keep weaving your meanings into your images.
Good job.

Fear is not pertinent said...

Great blog all around! I enjoy reading your work : )

Jingle said...

oops, I did not place your link in rally week 33 because you did not include the link in the comment,
my fault.
I will add your entry to week 33 and to the journal.
Thanks for letting me know.

peachpitproduction said...

very wonderful piece congrats on the Perfect Poet award it's very well deserved!! glad I stopped by!

dakshi said...

wonderful.Thanx for stopping by...

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