Sunday, November 28, 2010

Marriage


Melding of two individuals
A new world to build
Relationship based on trust
Responsibilities to take
In unison they must live
Although they quarrel
Gifting their heart to each other
Emotional bond, eternal love


For One Single Impression.
Prompt 144: Meld.

23 comments:

Amity said...

Hi Sumit;

You have written about the best example of matters that meld...marriage it is!

Very nice take on the prompt Sumit!

Harshad mehta said...

Yes Sumit, that is how a relationship should be. Well said.

Ramesh Sood said...

A beautifully expression this! Sumit, 'although they quarrel' yes, it is essential too..to enjoy the love and trust.. well said dear.. a thanks for your emboldening comment on my poem..

Nanka said...

Looks like an ideal sort of marriage :) If only life was so easy and no such things as ego existed. A very well done Acrostic Sumit!!

sandra said...

love your vision of marriage...thanks!

♥ Chocoholic ♥ said...

this one ish sweet :)

Jingle Poetry said...

beautiful,
real and magical,
thanks for sharing...


don't forget to link some of your poems to potluck tonight,
Happy Sunday!

Tumblewords: said...

Ah a nice reference to meld!

Felicity said...

Love how you've worked in an acrostic here as well.

The Write Girl said...

Beautiful poem...marriage is certainly the melding of two individuals into a new life. Lovely words.

ms pie said...

so enjoy acrostics....marriage is by definition a meld indeed... wouldn't it be interesting to have a world when one marries it is for life... i like to think everything would be so different.. we would have to work out our differences in a timeless manner instead of what we want right now... dreamland i know, can't help it...

Sumit Sarkar said...

Thank you everyone :)

dan roberson said...

"Although they quarrel" they learn to work through their differences and grow closer because of that.
I enjoyed the acrostic as well as the content, marriage as intended.

Jim said...

A very nice acrostic poem you have written, Sumit. Everything that marriage takes you have included.
What may start as a perfect marriage sometimes, somehow, becomes violated in the eternal love aspect.
I'm on my second, it has lasted for 37 plus years now. And yes we quarrel but we still have that bond in love.
..

JamieDedes said...

The ideal. Lovely. :-)

Patti said...

What a beautiful take on the prompt! That sure is the ideal- thanks for the lovely acrostic.

Geraldine said...

This is a perfect interpretation of the prompt! Nice work and so romantic. G

http://veggiesyarnsandtails.wordpress.com/2010/11/30/some-treasures-from-etsy-great-gift-ideas-too/

Sumit Sarkar said...

Thank you guys... :)

lynnaima said...

hmmmm I like! beautiful! thanks for sharing...
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2010/12/01/the-bastis-by-the-road/

ladynimue said...

Perfect !

Teresa said...

Truly a wonderful take on the prompt. Marriage really is a melding of lives. Nicely done!

Amanda Moore said...

Wonderful acrostic it fits beautifully with the meld prompt!

Sumit Sarkar said...

Thank you guys... :)

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