Friday, December 3, 2010

Don't Go Away

I am happy to be in your heart
For it is the only heaven I know
If you leave me alone and apart
I will be pierced and so your heart
With the same arrow

Remember the moments we cherished
Together, holding hand in hand
Don't you let me feel banished
Think of the special times we relished
Over the argument we just had

You have every reason to be angry
I cannot blame you for it
My eyes were hidden behind the drapery
For it was definitely an act of folly
Your heart, with happiness I want to lit

Don't you go away, my love, I am sorry
Don't you go away


For Thursday Poets Rally Week 34.

29 comments:

ladynimue said...

Love to read you :)
Such thoughtful apology .. beautiful :)


PS : If not 12, i will love to see you write even 1 post for the challenge i am hosting. Hope this inspires you ;)

Brian Miller said...

oh this one hits the mark...and i understand the feelings behind it...

Heather said...

Love the rhythm, imagery, and your word choices, 'my eyes were hidden behind the drapery'

And thanks for calling me cutie, as I'd guess I'm nearly twice your age maybe not quite ;-) made my day.

Jingle said...

You have every reason to be angry
I cannot blame you for it
My eyes were hidden behind the drapery
For it was definitely an act of folly
Your heart, with happiness I want to lit...

well put,
smooth flow,
truly enjoyed reading it.

Chris G. said...

A touching apology, deep feeling behind your words...no doubting the sincerity. Good rhythm and imagery too!

David Waters said...

touching and heartfelt

Claudia said...

what a touching, heartfelt and special way to say sorry..

Sayandeep Kundu said...
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Sayandeep Kundu said...

seems to me as musical as a melodious Denver composition.. great work.. :)
Regards~ Sayandeep

Thoughts Not Lost said...

Lovely and touching. I imagine this poem set to music. Great job!

ashbeezone said...

Very beautiful imagination..
Take a look on my poetry..
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2010/11/25/depths-of-my-heart

Lu Ann said...

When someone apologizes like you just did... wow. It means a lot. I would forgive you.
Very nice poem! Happy Rally!

rahul said...

hi sumit...due to some unavoidable circumstances i was not able to follow ur posts..but now let me admit that u have really turned into a mature write..real beauty lies in the way u write(with pure and pious soul)...keep it up..

The Write Girl said...

This is such a heartfelt poem which evokes a lover's plea. Beautifully written.

wordsworthmillions said...

Musical. I would love to hear some one read this poem aloud to me.
Good job. :)

Gaurang Rao said...

Beautiful Imagination

drmadangoyal said...

Poetic apology is really strong.
You write strong poetry.
Bloom nicely in everybody's heart.

Harshika said...

very beautiful and honest :)

The Reason You Come said...

A poem meant to touch an angry lover's heart. And I think it will succeed! ;) Reads like good lyrics for a song.

Leo said...

The voice seems true, Sumit, and the lover to whom it is dedicated will surely forgive :) lovely poem. it had a rhythm to it :)

Here is my Rally Poem

Dasuntoucha said...

Touching write...felt.

Geraldine said...

This is very touching and romantic! Heartfelt words...

www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.com

Seasweetie said...

Beautiful and poignant - I can feel the love. Thank you for sharing.

My submission for Thursday Poet's Rally:
http://seasweetie.wordpress.com/2010/12/01/haiku/

wordsworthmillions said...

A very touching plea. And beautiful too. No one would go away if such beautiful pleas are written. :)

Wysteria said...

Oh this is sad and beautiful at the same time. How can she not forgive?

Wysteria

Sumit Sarkar said...

Thank you everyone for your generous comments... :)

Jingle said...

http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/12/08/thursday-poets-rally-week-34-participation-awards/

poets rally week 34 awards, enjoy!

Jingle said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/12/13/the-celebrate-blogger-of-2010-awards-nomination-announcement/

welcome voting,
you are nominated, you win one vote,
if you join us and vote for others, you win another vote, then you win at least a honorable mention award.

Good Luck!
Happy Wednesday!

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