Often aggressive and anxious
Under pressure; always curious
Tension of choosing the right path
Have the power to change the world
For One Shot Wednesday - Week 23 at One Stop Poetry.
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24 comments:
what a bright future. well done:)
I find the positive outlook of young people today to be very inspiring. You haven't been made bitter like my generation. Keep up your positive outlook and I will try to be open to receiving. Best, M.
You´ve just described myself!
:)
And it's so easy to chose the wrong path when we are young, isn't it? Your words ring true. Love the photo too.
Happy youth: please. Change the world.
So true! The youth of this world have so much to give. I pray they are given the opportunity to shine and live out their dreams. Great poem and photo.
wow....
thats a lovely acro Sumit..
i had done on varsity somewhat similar :D
and a super swell pic to go with it :d
Right you are
less words but depth is far too much ... great one.
that is where its at...and we need to invest like we believe it...
GREAT ONE..so true and i love how you constructed it! using the initials of YOUTH..they are the real treasure of any nation..:)
hats off for the charging input..made my heart smile..:)
So true! Very clever capture - through youth, you've captured the essence of youth. The construction, the word choice - all lead to a pleasant analysis.
Amen. Great job!
oh yes - they definitely have the power to change the world..great encouraging poem sumit!
You hit the mark with this one end the ending? "have the power to change the world!!" Perfect line!
Wow, Sumit.. this was just perfect!! Each and every word of it - it was like THE definition of youth!
Loved it!
love the image,
upbeat post.
GREAT write here. This is an uplifting and inspiring piece. Love and Light, Sender
and i know its a cliche but they really are the future...and yet in the uk we are know even piling debt on them before they even start with the disgusting hike in tuition fees..sorry...well written...pete
Very well done
Interesting poem structure - not one I'd use, it's too restricting for me - but you make it work, in a theme-tight, intriguing read fashion. :)
You have truly captured that strange time of youth excellently! Hope they can grab hold of that promise and cultivate to make those changes in the world. Nice One Shot!
Teresa
Poignant and precise words indeed...you scribe a universal truth here...respect.
Perfectly describes our youth. Such a wonderful illustration as well. Good stuff ...
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