Thursday, January 6, 2011

Naked Beginning

Naked beginning
Parents love - the only cloak
Soft, tender, hearty


For Haiku Heights.
Prompt #24 - Beginning.

17 comments:

Anonymous said...

Sweet lines... :)

Tanishka... said...

Beautiful lines... :)

ladynimue said...

Lovely thought !

Claudia said...

oh this makes my heart feel all warm..nice one

Punam said...

I couldn't understand this one!!!

aconnectiontomyheart said...

Our only first unconditional love.. Amazing write.. Cloak works wonders for the wintry weather.. Great!

The Write Girl said...

So beautiful. We all begin this way. Tender and sweet haiku here!

drmadangoyal said...

I found it sound like taking birth.
That is lovely moment.

Sumit Sarkar said...

Thanks for your lovely comments friends...

@drmadangoyal
Yes Sir, I have written about that moment..the moment of birth.. :)

@Punam
When we are born, we are covered and protected with a cloak (parent's love) which is soft and tender as well as strong and hearty at the same time.

WINDOWLAD said...

Always adorable of you... you certainly got out of your niche with your haikus... i enjoyed the read... i hope the new year is treating you kind buddy...!:)

Good day!:)

~Kelvin

Vivek Chamoli said...

Nice lines :)

meperry said...

"Naked Beginning" is beautiful and I thank you for your Holiday wishes. I hope yours were filled with love and the year ahead with peace and creativity.

Deepika said...

The most beautiful moment for parents as well as child. Its amazing how god has built us- miracle within. Good read.

viddhi said...

amazing :)

Jingle said...

striking opening.
elegant Haiku.

Happy Sunday!

Do link to potluck poetry tonight.

JamieDedes said...

This is very sweet and nicely wrought. I appreciate it as both a daughter and a mother. Quite wonderful.

By the way, I do love your Sunday Sketch. Reminds me of being a little kid again! Thanks for that.

Kavita said...

Awww..this is such a sweet and tender sentiment, Sumit...
love it love it love it!!!

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