Friday, February 18, 2011

After A Long Day


Quiet path; tread along
A long day has passed - sleep time
Dreams to unravel


For The Haiku Challenge - Day 17.
Theme: Ravel

14 comments:

Rashmi said...

Beautiful haiku

lynnaima said...

rest and all will be clear. I enjoy the picture as well :)

Brian Miller said...

as long as they dont unravel you....

David Allen Waters said...

so peacful, beautiful

Someone is Special said...

beautiful BRO.. Haiku on..

Someone is Special

Iwrite4u said...

"dreams to unravel"..nice.I liked it

Jingle said...

beautiful entry.

Jingle said...

Greetings, how are you?
Your absence is missed, hope you well…
Write a free verse 4 Poets Rally, enjoy poetic friends, you are invited!

Hope to see you in,

Love your poetry talent and looking forward to a profound experience with your input.

Cheers.
xoxox

liv2write2day said...

A nice haiku to read at this time of night...and I'm heading off to unravel the day!

subtlescribbler said...

a good haiku :) so beautifully u have tried to unravel the day passed !

sarah

bodhirose said...

Perfectly beautiful. I loved this, Sumit!

Dibakar Sarkar said...

perfect...

Kelvin S. M. said...

..a perfect moment after a long and busy day... i enjoyed the read!!!^^

trisha said...

simply divine sumit. and to spellbound us you have added a magical pic.

trisha

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